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Re: CLS Look Jaguar
You're quite good in terms of rendering! Do you study somewhere or do you do this "for fun"?
I like the high window line on the car and the air intakes in the front fender but the styling cues on that car are directly deriven from the Jags and the CLS.
Jaguars always have a long-stretched, sleek look (compare the cabin to the engine and trunk compartments) so the coupe-version on a XJ for example would be quite difficult to accomplish.
Greetings!
I like the high window line on the car and the air intakes in the front fender but the styling cues on that car are directly deriven from the Jags and the CLS.
Jaguars always have a long-stretched, sleek look (compare the cabin to the engine and trunk compartments) so the coupe-version on a XJ for example would be quite difficult to accomplish.
Greetings!
Re: CLS Look Jaguar
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Canay said:
what do you think about my work on a Jaguar which is a 4 door Coupe looking sedan like the Mercedes CLS?
Canay, this comment is not in any way meant to reflect negatively on your work, but I read somewhere that the CLS was meant to be MB's attempt to catch the lighter, sportingly elegant look of some Jaguar cars.
So your rendering could be said to be a Jaguar trying to be a Mercedes trying to be a Jaguar!
If you had not already read the same comment I mentioned above, then your rendering suggests that your designer's eye had subconsciously spotted where the MB stylists got their inspiration from.
Re: CLS Look Jaguar
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Ferdie said:
Jaguars always have a long-stretched, sleek look (compare the cabin to the engine and trunk compartments) so the coupe-version on a XJ for example would be quite difficult to accomplish.
But it has been accomplished before.
Remember the Jaguar XJ6 and XJ12 Coupes of the mid '70s? 
(Well those of us who were born then might remember them
).
Re: CLS Look Jaguar
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Ferdie said:
You're quite good in terms of rendering! Do you study somewhere or do you do this "for fun"?
I like the high window line on the car and the air intakes in the front fender but the styling cues on that car are directly deriven from the Jags and the CLS.
Jaguars always have a long-stretched, sleek look (compare the cabin to the engine and trunk compartments) so the coupe-version on a XJ for example would be quite difficult to accomplish.
Greetings!
I have learned it all by myself. I did not go to any school , but I my dream is to work for an automobil company maybe one day. S o i am working hard on my drawing and rendering technics.
Re: CLS Look Jaguar
Canay, was hast Du denn bisher gemacht? Auf Deiner Homepage steht, dass Du 28 Jahre alt bist - ich ebenfalls! Wohne übrigens nicht weit weg von Dir.
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Fritz, I chose the wrong words. Of course I remember the XJ-coupes but I meant a coupe-like 4door just like the CLS - or the Alfa 156 to a certain extend, if you wanna take it into account! The XJ-coupe had the relation of roof and trunk moved further to the middle of the car, what is a traditional item to define coupes.
This doesn't work that easily on a 4door, since you need at least a fairly sufficient head room for the rear passengers.
Canary, don't get me wrong about my harsh comments - I am working in the design business also and I want to give you some productive comments. Hope it helps!
It is common that you over-emphasize the proportions on a car drawing, and I don't know if you did it on purpose - but maybe you should take it back one step and change the relation between chassis and cabin. Make the cabin a little bigger to improve this relation and also correct the passenger side headlights a bit to the left on the picture (move it to the right front wheel).
Greetings!
Back to English:
Fritz, I chose the wrong words. Of course I remember the XJ-coupes but I meant a coupe-like 4door just like the CLS - or the Alfa 156 to a certain extend, if you wanna take it into account! The XJ-coupe had the relation of roof and trunk moved further to the middle of the car, what is a traditional item to define coupes.
This doesn't work that easily on a 4door, since you need at least a fairly sufficient head room for the rear passengers.
Canary, don't get me wrong about my harsh comments - I am working in the design business also and I want to give you some productive comments. Hope it helps!
It is common that you over-emphasize the proportions on a car drawing, and I don't know if you did it on purpose - but maybe you should take it back one step and change the relation between chassis and cabin. Make the cabin a little bigger to improve this relation and also correct the passenger side headlights a bit to the left on the picture (move it to the right front wheel).
Greetings!
Re: CLS Look Jaguar
ich habe 3,5 Jahre eine Ausbildung zum technischen zeichner gemacht und seit dem arbeite ich hier bei der HP chemie pelzer GmbH.
In meiner Freizeit habe ich ständig an meiner Darstellungstechnik gearbeitet. Da ich kein Abitur habe, ist es für mich nicht möglich in Pforzheim zu studieren. Aber wo ein Wille ist ist auch ein Weg.
Woher bist du denn???
In meiner Freizeit habe ich ständig an meiner Darstellungstechnik gearbeitet. Da ich kein Abitur habe, ist es für mich nicht möglich in Pforzheim zu studieren. Aber wo ein Wille ist ist auch ein Weg.
Woher bist du denn???
Re: CLS Look Jaguar
Ruhrgebiet!
An einigen Unis scheint es auch Ausnahmen zu geben - da solltes Du Dich mal nach erkundigen. Holst Du Dein Abitur gerade nach?
Solltest Du noch ein paar Fragen haben, kann ich Dir vielleicht weiterhelfen.
Hast Du die Reflexionen auf dem Fenster mit Airbrush oder ausschließlich mit Photoshop erstellt?
Gruß nach Witten!
An einigen Unis scheint es auch Ausnahmen zu geben - da solltes Du Dich mal nach erkundigen. Holst Du Dein Abitur gerade nach?
Solltest Du noch ein paar Fragen haben, kann ich Dir vielleicht weiterhelfen.
Hast Du die Reflexionen auf dem Fenster mit Airbrush oder ausschließlich mit Photoshop erstellt?
Gruß nach Witten!
Re: CLS Look Jaguar
In Antwort auf:Eigentlich ist fast das ganze auto mit Photoshop erstellt. Habe nämlich nur begrenzte Anzahl an Layout MArkern (12 an der Zahl)
Ferdie said:
Ruhrgebiet!
An einigen Unis scheint es auch Ausnahmen zu geben - da solltes Du Dich mal nach erkundigen. Holst Du Dein Abitur gerade nach?
Solltest Du noch ein paar Fragen haben, kann ich Dir vielleicht weiterhelfen.
Hast Du die Reflexionen auf dem Fenster mit Airbrush oder ausschließlich mit Photoshop erstellt?
Gruß nach Witten!
Abitur will ich jetzt nachmachen ... In Form von Abendschule. Und dann mal sehen. Ich habe auch evtl. daran gedacht in Wuppertal Industrie Design zu studieren, und später in Pforzheim meinen MAster of Transportation zu machen. Ich muß nur zusehen wie ich mich während meines Studiums über Wasser halte. Wahrscheinlich muß ich dann ein -gewerbe anmelden und nebenbei versuchen mit design was geld zu verdienen. Mal schauen ...
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